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DREAMS
Contributed by
bearwon
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 07:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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EVERY TIME I AWAKE
I NEED TO GO BACK TO SLEEP
WHERE THE DREAMS ARE SO REAL
WHERE THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL AND PURE
THE KIND OF DREAMS THAT CHANGE YOUR SOUL
YOUR INNER CORE
DREAMS THAT ALLOW YOU TO BE WHO YOU ARE
DREAMS THAT CAUSE TEARS OF FULLFILMENT
IN A WORLD THAT LOOKS DOWN ON INDIVIDUALITY
A WORLD THAT FEEDS ON THE WORD HATE
LIKE A LION ON A FRESH PIECE OF MEAT
DREAMS ARE OUR ESCAPE
FROM REALITY WHERE IT HURTS TO OPEN YOUR EYES
FEARFUL OF THE DISAPPOINTMENT
THATS ON THE OTHER SIDE WAITING FOR YOU
DREAMS ARE AS REAL AS WE MAKE THEM
SO KEEP DREAMING THOSE DREAMS AND BELIEVE
THAT ONE DAY THEY WILL CHANGE
WHAT WE ARE.
Copyright ©
bearwon
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2005-08-12 19:15:42]
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Re: DREAMS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 07:56:09 PM AEST
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Very touchin write..Beautiful
I can relate to this..
Keep writing
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: DREAMS
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:18:20 AM AEST
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A word to the wise...
DON'T USE ALL CAPS IN POETRY. It kills the lyricism as surely as a .470 Weatherby.
Other than that, you've done well. Keep it up.
Andrew |
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Re: DREAMS
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by Iwan on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 06:01:57 AM AEST
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"FROM REALITY WHERE IT HURTS TO OPEN YOUR EYES
FEARFUL OF THE DISAPPOINTMENT"
That's my favourite bit. It's quite an absorbing little poem, very real and easy to relate to.
Good work :) |
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