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Ivory Keys
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 06:01:33 PM in AEST
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Candle lit piano keys
feel so poetic to the touch
an ocean of black and white
This melody from key
eases a broken heart
I take time to listen
Soothing tunes
heard from closed eyes
a freedom song
I breakaway
hurts to ponder
mends to listen
A healing tone
so forgiving and kind
pay attention to its life
Each note a heartbeat
so close to yours
feeling as one
Still I listen
the emotion within me
peeling away my sadness
An overcoming joy
built on strong legs and ivory keys
salvation awaits in this song
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Re: Ivory Keys
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 07:42:44 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem ,hope to read some more some time. |
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Re: Ivory Keys
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by Kie on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:40:17 PM AEST
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Oh I could certainly relate. I have loved piano for as long as I could remember. Not only for its beauty but for its resonance and the reverberation I feel inside when I sit down and express what I simply can't say.
"Each note a heartbeat
so close to yours
feeling as one"
Oh yes!! That is exactly how it feels!!!
Your poem is beautiful, very much so.
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Re: Ivory Keys
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:11:48 AM AEST
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Beautiful work. I've always liked poetry about music, especially precisely this kind of poetry.
Well done!
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Re: Ivory Keys
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 11:10:25 PM AEST
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Good poem, it sorta reminds me of one of mine but in a bit of a shorter way. But, heh, mines about depression! I can't help but laugh at that. How can a piano can express so much sorrow or such joy? It all depends on the song.
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