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THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD!
Contributed by
brokenandinlove16
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:48:02 PM in AEST
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THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD!
I hate that smell more than ever and the sound of breathing freaks me out.
I can see your outline in the shadow as you stumble into my room… AGAIN.
This is nothing new… I would try to fake that I were asleep,
but that doesn’t work… I have tried one too many times before.
Always let down by my failure and stupidity… why don’t I just say no,
wait I tried that already too… God PUT ME DOWN I don’t want to go to your room.
I know what you're going to do… I think you need a girlfriend,
I'm your daughter REMEMBER??… I want my mommy!
Actually, no I don’t… it's her fault I'm here in the first place,
she told you to get me, and let you drag me away… I screamed.
She wouldn’t save me… was I a bad little girl… I was only 5 years old,
did she not want me anymore … what happen to beware of strangers ?
MOMMY… WHERE ARE YOU!!! WHY DIDN’T YOU SAVE ME!!
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Re: THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD!
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 04:33:16 PM AEST
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| i think is very sad and the unheard cry shows through your poetry.....im sorry its hard being so young....xxx |
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Re: THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD!
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by Sahara on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:30:55 PM AEST
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Great write... shows alot of emotion, undealt anger.
I know you probablt don't want to hear this, but - from one shattered child, it does get easier to deal with believe it or not and in time you can put it behibd you (or so I've been told LOL)
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Re: THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD!
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by thepizzaguy on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:38:25 PM AEST
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It's a very depressing poem. I feel sorry that everything that has happened to you in your life, well, happened. Cheer up, life's going to get better, i promise.
--Steve |
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