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Just When I Thought.....
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:08:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Just when I thought,
I could do no wrong,
You sang to me,
Our fair-well song,
Just when I thought,
Things would get no better,
You sent to me,
That good-bye letter,
Just when I thought,
Your kiss ment something,
The last one,
Really ment nothing,
Just when I thought,
You were coming home,
I found you in her arms,
In your house all alone,
Just when I thought,
The deal was done,
You came back,
For some one-on-one,
I guess you didn't think,
Your genius plan through,
'Cause guess what,
I'm over you.
Copyright ©
Writting_Fever
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2005-08-12 15:08:44]
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Re: Just When I Thought.....
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by brokenwings on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:28:27 PM AEST
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all cheaters deserve a dose of their own medicine.. good write..
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Re: Just When I Thought.....
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 10:08:13 PM AEST
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wow what a wonderful poem, this one is really truely great! I enjoyed it a lot lol, great job!!
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Re: Just When I Thought.....
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:38:15 PM AEST
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Well-rhymed, but I personally tend to like longer lines. The ending is very matter-of-fact, not quite what I expected. Still, over it is a good thing to be. Keep it up.
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