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Waterfalls
Contributed by
mom11159
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:44:01 PM in AEST
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A wonderful site to be seen, in water oh so grand
As crystal clear comes crashing down, on the rocky water land
A mist is splattered over all that are near this beautiful site
As they witness the spectacular waterfalls, beauty and its’ might
The crystal blue wonder that pounds down on the rocks
Often seems to do a dance, then it starts to mock
The natural flow of water now plundering with such force
To let us know the might of this Waterfall on its course
So breathtaking sitting there, just watching the glorious show
Of nature and the water combining all it knows
It speaks to nature just to say I’m here to keep alive
All of Gods beauty I’ll continue to help it thrive
Replenishing the waterhole with its beautiful display
To give a thirsty animal a drink along the way
God gave this wondrous waterfall the ability to plunder
Down into the waterhole to combine with natures wonder
So sit and watch this waterfall, enjoy the feeling inside
While witnessing the breathtaking show, thrashing down with pride
Let its beauty fill your heart with knowledge, peace and truth
Now knowing that the waterfall keeps nature in its youth!
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Re: Waterfalls
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:55:59 PM AEST
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I like nature poems and have read two now from you ... I like this as much as the one about wolves. You are creative with rhyme and very descriptive in your words. Nicely written.
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Re: Waterfalls
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by bernard2 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:09:09 PM AEST
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| Another nature poem from your talented pen. I enjoy this type of poetry the best i emote with each word that is written.thank you for another fine read from bernard2 |
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Re: Waterfalls
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:20:57 PM AEST
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Cathy, your imagery is so wonderful. Waterfalls, oh yes, I love them. Mainly because not only are they beautiful and show the raw power of nature, but there is always a rainbow around somewhere, lol. Your nature poems are some of the best I have read. I do enjoy your work so much.
Smiles n hugs,
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Re: Waterfalls
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:22:08 PM AEST
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Excellent write..very enjoyable to read.
Jeff |
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Re: Waterfalls
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:26:25 PM AEST
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a tapestry beautifully woven with words takes me to another place I could picture and smell the air wonderful
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Re: Waterfalls
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:31:24 PM AEST
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Cathy, this is a wonderful write. The imagery is great as you took me there to the waterfall, I could sense it's awesomeness. You are very talented. I really enjoyed this.
Tim |
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Re: Waterfalls
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by DarkYuke on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:42:43 AM AEST
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| Nice Poem! Even though I don't like ones which are all happy (I prefer sad and sombre ones), it's excellent. Fantastic description of the water falling down onto the rocks. |
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