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to all you fine poets!
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:35:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I'll leave this region
for trees of growing
for land that's breathing
deep inside of me
i'll make my way through
tall stacks of hay
until i find you
my pin yesterday
i'll take my time to
send you wishes
like fruits and dishes
i always miss you
all of my words are
just sounds you say
i won't go too far
i'll come back to play
i'll miss you smiling
inside your words
within the rhymes
that fly like birds
take care all you rhymers
lovers crying, lovers smiling
words of hate, love and fate
till the next time.. take care.
Dwayne Wabegijig
Copyright ©
In_a_While
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2005-08-12 12:35:48]
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Re: to all you fine poets!
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by ChromePlatedHrt on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:45:42 PM AEST
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| I am new here, and I see you are a great writer. Hope to see more of your work very soon. Take care. |
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Re: to all you fine poets!
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by bernard2 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:11:57 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this write muchly thank you for a pleasant read. come back soon from bernard2. |
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Re: to all you fine poets!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:26:49 PM AEST
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Oh Dwayne:
I don't even know you, my heart loves your heart that is so kind, so knowing, so pure, so alive.
The poem brought tears to my eyes.
Your farewell to leave us in this struggling world of words. Words that want to hide from our thoughts, our memories, our hearts. Playful, playful words.
Taking a deep breath too. Find the pin.
You will be close enough to all of us writers.. only because your heart is open for us to find yours.
Beautiful write.. full of love and truth.
RLPoetress ; ))
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Re: to all you fine poets!
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:27:03 PM AEST
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Come back soon, Dewayne. You and your lovely words will be missed. Sending blessings with you.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: to all you fine poets!
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:37:45 PM AEST
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Very nice send off Dwayne! Congratulations on being done with your studies, and have a great vacation! Make sure you get to that library to post!!! Take Care : )
Scorp. |
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Re: to all you fine poets!
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by sride686 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 08:22:28 PM AEST
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| Wow Dwayne a great way to say goodbye and very well said my friend. as you know I’m a fan of your work but life in Iraq has kept me from commenting on peoples stuff these days i don't have enough time. take care and i hope to see your great words and unique style on this sight again. you are a good writer and inspire me and others to write. take care and keep writing your friend....Steve |
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Re: to all you fine poets!
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 05:51:43 AM AEST
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in_a_while
A nice tribute for all of us struggling poets; including yourself.
Hurry back !
We'll be missing you and your words that flow from your heart.
Never say good-bye,but say so-long
Until we see you again
another friend.
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Re: to all you fine poets!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 11:20:32 AM AEST
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very well done...I like this...Shari
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