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Fading Love
Contributed by
ChromePlatedHrt
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:09:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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are you still happy
with me, with us
i'm never completely sure
it's something we don't discuss
when it comes to how you feel
all is quiet and unsaid
no more sweet words
do you still say them in your head
where is this love
you used to show and share
do you still feel the same
it's no longer in the air
before i could feel it
see it in your eyes
hear it in your voice
it was never disguised
now you try to hide it
is it you or is it me
why do you hold it captive
set your feelings free
show mw again
like you showed me before
you don't have to worry
i'll take it for granted no more
i've made that mistake
but never again do i dare
let down those walls
for it is only fair
i give you my all
everything that i can
i can't do it alone
this you must understand
so come out from behind
those walls which you hide
come back where you belong
here by my side
we're in this together
i know you know how
so show me your love
all your heart will allow
Copyright ©
ChromePlatedHrt
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2005-08-12 11:09:39]
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Re: Fading Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:30:39 AM AEST
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Wow..Left me speechless
Sure understand where you coming from..
when 1 gets hurt they build a wall..
I know cause i protect my from falling down..
Takes time have to take down brick by brick.. Wishing you the best.. Keep up the beautiful writing
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Fading Love
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:24:34 PM AEST
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| very good write i also live in a big wall never to come out again |
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Re: Fading Love
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by Erualaitalmarea on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:14:40 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC! This was a very moving write it stirred up emotions with every line, good job!
~The Elvish Poetess~ |
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Re: Fading Love
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:37:11 PM AEST
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Poignant emotions written here. Walls are built from fear and hurt. They don't fall easily.
Welcome to YPDC. Thank you for posting.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Fading Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 02:49:39 PM AEST
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i read "For The Love of My Son" first. I keep thinking ... dang ... you could be writing my life. This was a nice first post. You have set a nice bar for yourself. Off to see what else you have in store.
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