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The Lady In The Dark
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:06:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The Lady In The Dark
There she sat in the dark
no stars, no moon, in the sky
The sounds of a train, in her mind
silently passed her by
The shadows of the trees
were in her mind as well
All these things of darkness
have cast an evil spell
It is time for her to awaken
and see the light of day
Move on to the brighter side
for this she must find her way
Life will be rewarding
and enjoyment she will find
Time to move out of the darkness
and totally unwind
The Lady In the Dark
will become the lady in the light
The moon and stars, will be there
as she enjoys each night
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-08-12 03:06:03]
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Re: The Lady In The Dark
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by wikedladi on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:07:49 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem.. nice way to bring her into the light! |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark
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by gwenevere on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:29:11 AM AEST
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| Out of darkness into light, a beautiful thought.another superb poem Bruce, Ros |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark
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by bernard2 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 04:17:03 AM AEST
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| A positive piece well written full of optimism top marks from bernard2 |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:50:37 PM AEST
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Smiling. And tonight, RD goes back out into those dark skies to sit, to unwind over and over again.
Tonight, RD will watch the light show in the sky. The show you have created for her.
Bruce, you are amazing. You make the night so light.
RD must sit and dissolve the days happenings and yes the spent time in the dark to move on.
And when she wakes up all refreshed she goes about her business, until the darkness comes to bring on another new day.
I love it, story of all her nights.
What does RD do when it rains outside?
She gets wet.
RLPoetess ; )) |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:16:43 PM AEST
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A lovely poem for a lovely lady. Yes, she needs much light in her life. God is working and all will be well.
Rita |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark
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by AshRayne on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:27:42 PM AEST
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it seems the lady found the light to her darkness. perhaps this is a sign of hope. perhaps the light truly does exist.
wonderful poem, hope to see more.
exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection
~Ash |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:19:22 PM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:39:43 PM AEST
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Ill remeber this poem when Im having a down day its so uplifting and encouraging
Michelle |
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