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nothing would change
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:57:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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things would be okay
if i only had a reason
a motive
an idea
a way to make it though....
things wouldn't seem so bad
if i only had a purpose
a destination
a goal
i don't know where im going...
things could be much better
if i only had the strength
the determination
the guts
to do it...
things wouldn't change
if i only had a rope
a way to hang my hopes
and end this all
nothing would change...
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2005-08-12 02:57:08]
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Re: nothing would change
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by wikedladi on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:02:54 AM AEST
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Your full of ideas! Finding prespective isnt something that comes easily. Life is more about the unknown. the future isnt set in stone, theres no way of knowing whats next.
-good poem- |
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Re: nothing would change
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by MDodgen on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:59:41 PM AEST
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| very strong and dark images. you have a whole life ahead of you, please dont give up now. it will get better. just give it time. good write, very moving. 5 stars |
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Re: nothing would change
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 10:22:18 PM AEST
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| how would your life unfold if you did this. Same advice you gave me. Don't give up. Everything will turn out alright and you will see the sun and feel happiness again. |
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