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Death
Contributed by
Demonic_Depression_7625
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:18:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Blood gushes like a river
Pain rising up in fumes
Death forming all around me
Mist changing as it looms
Screams echo in the distance
The moon like candlelight
Shadows creeping up behind me
Grass turns red throughout the night
Skulls crunching beneath my foot
Bodies staggering to the ground
My laughter shrills the silence
Leftovers is all to be found
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2005-08-12 02:18:06]
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Re: Death
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:32:41 AM AEST
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| nice wording, keep it up! and welcome to Y.P.D.C.! |
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Re: Death
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by wikedladi on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:58:30 AM AEST
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very depictive! nice way to paint a grusome picture with words : > |
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Re: Death
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 04:53:43 PM AEST
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greusome, i came to the conclusion from the welcome to here that you are new... great awsome poem for your first. great great,
kate |
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