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Does he...
Contributed by
Shnannon
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:10:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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As I watch him from a distance
I feel an ache of longing.
Does he know I'm watching?
As he speaks of his latest adventure
I soak up every word.
Does he realize I care so much?
As he moves in and out of the crowd
I wish he would move closer to me.
Does he feel my need for him?
As I daydream about what could be
I feel a smile creep across my face.
Does he ever think about me?
As I watch him leave
I wish I had the courage to follow.
Does he notice I miss him?
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2005-08-12 02:10:43]
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Re: Does he...
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by wikedladi on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:21:21 AM AEST
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| nice display of emotions! Seeing the one you care for just brings a smile to ure face.. even if he hasnt noticed you yet. A+ |
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Re: Does he...
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by emystar on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:43:24 AM AEST
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Very sweet write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Does he...
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by Archie on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:26:33 AM AEST
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| This is such a great poem. I think the questions you ask yourself in the poem are the same ones you should ask the person you are talking about. This is a very thought provoking write. |
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