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Mommy, Why do you hate me so?
Contributed by
Ineedanap
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:20:53 AM in AEST
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I can no longer take it
This torment that seethes
Throughout your entire body
And transmits into me
Your icy soul and bitter heart
Has consumed me entirely
And as my body decays in front of you,
No mercy shall I see
I thought that mothers always cared
About the blood of their own
But now I know that’s just a fairy tale
Another story turned cold
I’ve loved and given all I had
To try and make you content
But now my body is bruised a broken
A victim of self-regret
So mommy tell me just one thing
And I promise I will go
Why do you love everyone more than me?
Why do you hate me so?
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Ineedanap
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Re: Mommy, Why do you hate me so?
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by thisismesodeal on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:33:27 AM AEST
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| Great poem good use of words |
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Re: Mommy, Why do you hate me so?
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:34:26 AM AEST
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| I can appreciate this write, maybe she hates herself and taking it out on you is how she deals with it... i know how that is |
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Re: Mommy, Why do you hate me so?
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by Archie on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:35:37 AM AEST
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| Sometimes mothers are the hardest on the people they care about the most. It took many years before me and my mom could talk about any thing and for a long time i thought she hated me. |
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Re: Mommy, Why do you hate me so?
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by fromhopes2hopeless on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:39:10 AM AEST
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I like it alot because I've felt like my mom hates me too...that's when I just look at the others around me who care. Nice write
Dakota |
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Re: Mommy, Why do you hate me so?
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by Demonic_Depression_7625 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:57:46 AM AEST
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i like your poem a lot!
it sure sounds a lot like my mom too...i try doing whatever i can for her and she treats me like a door mat :(
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Re: Mommy, Why do you hate me so?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 10:59:59 AM AEST
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Brings a Tear to my eye... I can relate alot to this.. Wrote a poem similiar just not ready to share yet..
Just recently my mom disowned me..my sister and my brother*sigh* its really tough..
Being a mother myself I just can't see how someone can do that!! You are in my prayers..
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Mommy, Why do you hate me so?
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by bernard2 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:43:42 PM AEST
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| A good question to ask. I doubt if you will ever get an answer. sometimes the daughter or a son remind the partner of their companion. Life can be hard try developing a thicker skin it might help bernard2 |
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