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WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE
Contributed by
robertdavidson
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:50:33 AM in AEST
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LostLove
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WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE
by Robert Davidson
Yours is the heartbeat I yearn to own
As I touch and lightly stroke your red-gold hair;
I almost feel the kiss of you upon my mouth,
But you push me aside, I stand in despair.
Who has loved has lived full measure,
Even tho' the wind sighs like a muted violin.
But when love has no pleasure
The tense strings throb no more.
One starlight night I thought to steal a kiss.
To bend your will to mine, my single goal;
But a waning moon stared icily down,
'Cause hurting you was like fighting my soul.
Who has loved has lived full measure,
Even tho' the wind sighs like a muted violin.
But when love has no pleasure
The tense strings throb no more.
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Re: WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE
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by Ineedanap on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:52:23 AM AEST
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| Wow, powerful. I loved it |
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Re: WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:42:25 AM AEST
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| beautiful. great write full of emotions. nicely done |
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:58:48 AM AEST
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Beautifully penned. Tis true that when the lover turn away the violin strings are silent. Sadly, never to play the beautiful music of love again. Your imagery is beautiful.
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Re: WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE
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by wikedladi on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:30:52 AM AEST
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| most enjoyable read! i love that you thought not to hurt her to gain what u truly wanted |
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Re: WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE
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by Spike on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:26:19 AM AEST
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I second all the preceding comments. A strong and beautiful write, and unrequited love is a powerful and raw subject.
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Re: WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:37:08 PM AEST
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This ne just reaches out-n-grabs the soul and heart.
huggs,
emy
Very moving write. |
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