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The way i am
Contributed by
thisismesodeal
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:35:43 AM in AEST
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Why an I the way I am?
….I don’t really know…
Am I the way I need to be
….I don’t really know…
What if I’m not meant to be like this
Who am I meant be?
Should I change
If so how do I?
Would people like me better?
…Could I lie to them…
If I could lie to them
….Could I lie to myself….
After lying for so long,
Would I remember who I was
…Who I am….
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Re: The way i am
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by Ineedanap on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:40:51 AM AEST
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Good write, especially for your first free write. COngrats
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Re: The way i am
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by BEBE on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:50:14 AM AEST
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you are the way you are because God made you that way, if you look at one of my writes it is much like this, but i realized that God made me, made all of us for some special reason.. good write
GODBLESS,
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Re: The way i am
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:17:58 AM AEST
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| i feel ya... sometimes its tough |
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Re: The way i am
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:09:58 AM AEST
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| Pretty good for first time free verse there. I think the first lesson we should be taught in life is to be ourselves. And be the best of ourselves. It takes work growing and we learn from mistakes. The operative word there is LEARN and not keep repeating the same ones over and over. To me it is just too hard to keep up with lies so it is better to tell the truth even if a lie might be simplier to live with. JMO Rita |
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Re: The way i am
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by wikedladi on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:18:58 AM AEST
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| wonderful! its hard to realize who you truly are anymore in this world.. just another face in the crowd. GOOD FREE VERSE |
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Re: The way i am
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:32:03 PM AEST
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| as a new poet i am still learning all the diffrent ways to write i liked this writing style and your words were great nice poetry |
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Re: The way i am
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by Archie on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:51:49 PM AEST
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| Thought provoking poem. (I think honesty is the best road). |
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