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This life that I live
Contributed by
BEBE
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:18:21 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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So emotional,
Pouring the tears at that the thought that people dont like me. But who would? just another girl, who is quiet, gullable and so emotional unstable.
Grinding my teeth in anger, at the first person of the day looking at my lonely soul and turning to laugh about me to just another one of their so called friends, and me smiling at the thought maybe one day... someone will befriend me.
My siblings think im weird, but only appeared that way because i dont lower my self to their lying and cheating fantacy that they seem to call their life. But doesnt seem to faze them, that this very existance of my life is drifting away. Suffering, and cant seem to find the words to say that im lost in this made up world that i would like to call My LIFE.
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BEBE
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2005-08-12 00:18:21]
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Re: This life that I live
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by vibes2go on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:27:33 AM AEST
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| nice .. good job |
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Re: This life that I live
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by Ineedanap on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:28:48 AM AEST
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| Nice write but it seemed a lil choppy. Maybe word it a lil smoother, nonetheless, good job |
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Re: This life that I live
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by thisismesodeal on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:38:49 AM AEST
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| wow, good job, it could flow a little better but other than that its awsome. |
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Re: This life that I live
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by fromhopes2hopeless on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:56:41 AM AEST
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The part about lowering yourself...thats awesome...i like to read stuff like that...good write
Dakota |
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