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Lessons Learned
Contributed by
MadCackle
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Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:21:45 PM in AEST
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What once was the beggining, has now become the end
What once was pain and sarrow, has just begun to mend
ITs often confusing, when I am thinking to myself
Why are we so quick to judge, When we never like what we're delt
So many things make no sence to me, I am lost yet found my way
Young boy turned man struggling to be, the man they want today
Rage and hate are easy, when it comes to scream and spit
but the true test is love, that everyone strives to get
I never claim to have a handle on things, god knows Ive been wrong befor
One thing i do know is, its about the game and not the score!
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MadCackle
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Re: Lessons Learned
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:27:15 PM AEST
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Very good unique, meaningfull write.
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Re: Lessons Learned
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by BEBE on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:20:57 AM AEST
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Very nice write.. very correct. God knows everything you have done, but yet have you? I like your writing. Very meningful....
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Re: Lessons Learned
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:00:03 AM AEST
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*****I never claim to have a handle on things, god knows Ive been wrong befor
One thing i do know is, its about the game and not the score!
Your write is filled with wisdom here. It shows that you are not a quitter; that you won't give up learning the many lessons required to run a race that will strengthen you to get to the finish line.
*****ITs often confusing, when I am thinking to myself
Why are we so quick to judge, When we never like what we're delt
God gave each of us a gift. It is not what we do occasionally with our gift. What makes the difference is that we take our gift and bring it to life daily. And yes, most do not like their gift given, but one must learn how to use it.
Our stress-filled environment is our emotional field we live in.
The one greatest lesson I have learned is when I get fatigued, I lay down to rest. We are supposed to get tired. Fatigue is a God-given boundary that prevents us from pushing ourselves over the edge.
Your write shows wisdom. That you won't quit, won't give up your dreams of learning lessons.
Keep trusting, find the courage to endure all the pain and suffering here on earth. Your great reward is waiting for you.
Yes, very powerful write here. I enjoyed it immensely.
RLPoetess ; ))
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Re: Lessons Learned
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:18:11 AM AEST
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Oh AMEN!
"its about the game and not the score!"
I wish people would realize it is not the winning that is important. It is the knowledge learned from the game. This is really a great write.
Rita
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Re: Lessons Learned
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by ruthie1983 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:03:27 AM AEST
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I love this cuz i can relate right now
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