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One Last Promise
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:23:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I want you to know,
I'd never get by,
With out you in my life,
Right by my side,
Since the day I,
Memorized your face,
I found myself in,
Another stage,
You made my life worth,
Living life every day,
But now it is my turn,
To go away,
I'll tried to say it,
Much more than I should,
But if you needed it one more time,
I probably could,
Take my hand,
It's equal to yours,
I'll take it with me,
It's neither torture nor chore,
I've looked for so long,
And about just gave in,
Until I saw your smile,
Then I knew I could win,
The angels are calling,
So I don't have much time,
Just think of our memories,
You'll be forever mine,
I've opened my soul,
And told you no lies,
But as I drift off,
Be strong and don't cry.
Copyright ©
Writting_Fever
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Re: One Last Promise
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:28:20 PM AEST
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| Great write, beautiful and sad. |
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Re: One Last Promise
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by wikedladi on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:47:06 PM AEST
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| This poem is spectacual! it made me cry. I hope this person knows how lucky they are! |
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Re: One Last Promise
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:17:06 PM AEST
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wonderful write ..
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Re: One Last Promise
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by Archie on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:57:26 PM AEST
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| Wow this is great. (okay I'm not gonna cry) Very emotive write |
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Re: One Last Promise
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:41:02 PM AEST
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what an unsettiling sadness this gave me yet so beautifuly expressed, presented in such a touching manner, sensitive and yet heart breaking . . .
Ben |
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