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A Fractured Prayer
Contributed by
LolaWhite
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Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:03:22 PM in AEST
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A cut so deep I cannot last
What is now is from the past
Like the sands of time forever flowing
My hurt and pain is forever growing
The false hope of a never ending dream
Nightmares of solitude
Make me scream
The gush of red at night it drips
And place hold on my heart
With an evil grip
Pain fills a weak heart with deeds of lust
And leads a sinner astray
Far from His trust
But who am I, but one lonely soul?
Lost in this world
Feeling out of control
On my knees with tears of red
Praying to God
Showing all that was bled
Return me to Your grace
Wipe the tears from my face
And remove the darkness that surrounds this place
It is only You that can save us now
It is only You that can show me how
How to love and to forgive
To not count wrongs and continue to live
I love him dearly, and You know all
Please, God, Please
I continue to fall
I want to feel whole again
All parts as one
But I seem to be broken and on the run
Is it me who is fractured or him that I see?
Bind us together Lord
And let us be free
Copyright ©
LolaWhite
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2005-08-11 19:03:22]
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Re: A Fractured Prayer
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by kaosar on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:10:14 PM AEST
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| this is so nice .. and sad.. never look to the past my friend... past keep pulling us down. keep looking forward. I'll pray that God gather you again.. take care |
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Re: A Fractured Prayer
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:22:36 PM AEST
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This is very delicate sounds like some issues here a beautiful poem though
hope all is well with u . . .
Ben |
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Re: A Fractured Prayer
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by brew on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 10:42:38 PM AEST
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Such a powerful write, and sad. I wish you prayers, and hope. Thanks for sharing.........You always write, such reading writes.!
Brew~ |
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Re: A Fractured Prayer
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:14:34 PM AEST
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A cut so deep I cannot last
yes, I know .. like delicate lace and if even one more word is said you'll tear into fine shreds and die ... I know .. I so know. |
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Re: A Fractured Prayer
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by sride686 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 08:16:10 PM AEST
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| Wow my love what a great write this is. i already read it and it is written very well. the past hurts and it hurts me to and i wish it would just go away. but we are both in love with each other so nothing can stop us or hold us back. i love you so much my Lea-Ann. talk to you tonight and sson i'll return from Iraq and we can be together again. love always....Steve (Sride686) |
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