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What Happened To Us
Contributed by
MDodgen
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Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:38:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When I read
Your poem today
I have to be honest
I started shaking,
My mouth got dry
I felt only two inches tall
I miss being
The apple of your eye
The one you dream of at night
What makes her worthy?
What makes me not?
She's a wedge
Driven between us
So far at times
I cant see the other side
You know this
But yet you take her back
Am I just supposed to wait?
Til she wants you?
And im left
Broken hearted
And alone
Should I ignore it?
Hope one day your heart
Strays back to me?
Should I let you go?
Let you be free
To do what your heart wants?
I have so many
Unanswered questions
With no one to ask
So I sit alone
And console myself
I tell myself
He loves me
He loves ME.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2005-08-11 18:38:00]
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Re: What Happened To Us
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by Writting_Fever on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:04:34 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. The funny thing about it is that a boy I know that loves me is going through this exact state of mind. I know how he feels now. Thanx for sharing! |
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Re: What Happened To Us
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by kaosar on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:14:44 PM AEST
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| if you're sure he loves you .. what is this sadness for ?? I hope he's worth it.. cause .. guys can never be trusted |
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Re: What Happened To Us
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:18:17 PM AEST
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hey
very good and emotional write.I really understand you,my friend is going through this right now,and we were just speaking about it today,though he's a guy,but dont put your head down,its hard,but dont loose faith.t/c,and keep it up.peace.
love,
andrea |
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Re: What Happened To Us
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:23:05 PM AEST
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| This is a great write, it's not one that's hard to relate with. |
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Re: What Happened To Us
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by wikedladi on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:46:25 PM AEST
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i can feel ure every emotion in this poem. beautifully fluid, and yet so staright foward!
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Re: What Happened To Us
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:11:48 PM AEST
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| yes .. I've felt like this .. and it's rotten .. you pen it exactly. nice job. |
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Re: What Happened To Us
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:37:25 AM AEST
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When i saw the tittle i have to say i got a jilt and had to read it and so i did, how sad but
well crafted. lovely write never the less.
Ben |
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