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°°°My Passion°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
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I touch your lips and feel each line
As i hypnotize you and make you mine
My eyes undress your pain that flows
I'll make you mine, shh nobody knows
£
Don't move a muscle or breath a sound
Or in my pool of blue tears you'll drown
Just feel my hot breath on your tongue
And know that true love yes i have won
£
Let me hear the moan of your soul
So time can freeze as our passion unfolds
My body is covered with your warm chest
Oh kiss me now and you i will undress
£
I feel your chest move in and out
From breathing passions oh so loud
It makes me weak, i bite my bottom lip
It's your passion my sweet...i want to sip
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Sweat drips from my trembling breasts
As your fingertips on me caress
You pull me to your body tight
And make love to me all through the night
£
Pull my head back and pull my hair
Don't leave out nothing.. not anywhere
Press into me and moan my name
For passion in me will never be tame...
Copyright ©
OreO
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2003-01-13 19:00:00]
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by spooky on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 07:31:28 PM AEST
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| whoa,,,this was good for the imagination,,,beautiful oreo,, |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by FireStorm12 on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 07:51:46 PM AEST
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| OreO....OH MY GOD...I am so aroused now! Is that for me???? LOL. I mean DAMN!!! HOT HOT HOT...that was awesome. Now I have to go write something new...you've put all my work to shame with that one!!!!! Can I be your man?????? Please???? I want someone to want me and love me like that!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME....I mean it I am truly touched...by myself...but touched none the less. ROFL....sorry fireman humor...GREAT WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:16:05 PM AEST
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Wow Ok deep breath! That was just Wow!
And I do mean WOW! Great peice Oreo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!We all need cold showers!
Christina |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by EmptyWords on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:22:28 PM AEST
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| mmmmmmmmm,beautiful... |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by darkkai on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:48:50 PM AEST
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| Damn! this is the best i have ever read. Were you hearing Madonna's Erotica playing in the background while forming this??? Too much of an arousing poem that it almost turned me STR8!!!! lol. |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 09:14:42 PM AEST
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| great work very passionate |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 09:48:30 PM AEST
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Really hot and passionate!! Loved it..
Jenni |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by roisin on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 11:18:11 PM AEST
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I will just repeat the words that everyone has already said: hot, passionate, beautiful, erotic...a very warm, romantic poem...an aphrodisiac-like quality about it...
ta
rosie |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 12:12:36 AM AEST
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WoW!!!!! Passionate, erotic, HOT, romantic..... I don't know, All, I can say is Mmmmmmmm
Great Write OreO! Write more like this!
Panther |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 12:24:19 AM AEST
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| I thought this was a family web site? |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 01:14:08 AM AEST
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| Dear Mr/Mrs Anonymous, LMAO....it is a family site, dont you know it's passion that creates family? *winks* |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 01:25:15 AM AEST
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| This is the best poem of yours I have read - when I saw the few verses in the forum I thought Wow .. but you have outdone yourself. Ten out of ten.... I love this so much - I feel the same about passion - just gets better as you get older. :)))) |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 08:58:02 AM AEST
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Whew! It's a little warm in here ( opening window). This is the first erotic write I have seen here and you did VERY good job of it. I have a few like this but have been afriad to post them here....lol Also, to our annonomous friend...if people can write about suicide here and no one is offended...why cant we write about passion?
I'd rather my kids read about making love than killing themselves...wouldnt you? Larry |
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 11:41:03 AM AEST
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Wow......... Somehow I must have missed that when it was on the page... I found it now though............ and all I can say is........ wow....... Um... shouldn't have read it in school, but wow.......... Way to go OreO!!!!!!!
Jaime
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by gina on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 12:33:11 PM AEST
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everything abt the poem has been said ... and LOL for the ones who need to open the window or to have cold shower hehe i guess i need this myself LOL
gr8 piece of passion , melting......lol
*applause*
GINA :)
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by gina on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 12:36:39 PM AEST
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HAHAHAHA very smart reply to Mr/Mrs very polite LOOOOOOL, hehe i agree
i donno but i found this clever and funny :)
girl...wat can i say .......LOL
GINA |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by aernby on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 02:10:49 PM AEST
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very good
[too weak for further comment!]
aern + |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Haligh on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 10:01:43 PM AEST
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:-O
reminds me of some good times. ;-)
good poem! i like it a lot. |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 03:12:38 AM AEST
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| God !.I am enchanted. What a wonderful blast of blissful sensious poetry.. are you ' Isis" or are you 'Inanna' or are you 'Pele' ..surely you are singing an eternal song of Aphrodite...Your great friend..Venkat |
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by nomad on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 07:13:15 AM AEST
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| Oh, OreO, your passion is so-o-o-o intense, and so alive. I can feel every thought, and tremble. I need 7 or 8 cold showers. A beautifuuly written erotic, sensual piece. |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Opium on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 01:34:34 PM AEST
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| oh that is called passion! :P |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Mystery_Girl on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 07:59:04 AM AEST
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| Wow...what a passionate write.......tanya..:-) |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by LostDream on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 12:47:09 PM AEST
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Really beautiful...it describes perfectly the moment...Thank you
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 08:17:51 AM AEST
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"IT'S GETTING HOT IN HERRE!"
Any way this is a really great write and I hope to see more great writes like this! I never really thought that a poem could arouse so much attention! :-0 |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by BigMike on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 11:36:42 AM AEST
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| I figured since you commented on my work then i would comment you on yours(plus I have to since I'm a "poet and author " on this site) and ,in my opinion, this is one of your best poems. I wish you luck in all your jorneys. Good bye. |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by capergirl_23 on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 10:23:16 AM AEST
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This poem is amazing!! Totally grabbed my attention and took me to another place..where passion overwhelms the body and soul and knows no limits. You are wonderful.. it is like your feelings and passions flow from your pen when writing your words. Great write!! To the shower it is!! I have to honestly say, I read alot of poetry, and this is the first that actually sent me to the showers!!
~Take care~ |
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Re: °°°My Passion°°°
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by Lovingangel4u on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:42:05 PM AEST
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Wow! Excellent write OreO So beautiful and passionate. You are a true poet to express your feelings and moments as you do.
~Carmen~ |
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