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A Moment of Bliss
Contributed by
EmptyWords
on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He rakes his fingers across her flesh
feeding her hungry,innermost desires
her body so vulnerable under his touch
her heart,a passionate furnace of fire
his breath on her neck,rapid and warm
as her long fingers run through his hair
breathlessly she caresses his perfectly shaped lips
as the eyes of lovers meet,to engage in a stare
kissing her mouth he silences her moans
smiling, he savours the taste
as he rests his chin on her shoulder
to remain tranquil in a lovers embrace.
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Re: A Moment of Bliss
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by OreO on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 06:45:58 PM AEST
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Blissful moment only dreamt to be....as words on a screen is all it'll be....turned away and torn inside...i dont know what is wrong and right...beautiful write Empty..to paint this poem any other way that just how it is would be a sin....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: A Moment of Bliss
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by FireStorm12 on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:06:32 PM AEST
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| I agree with OreO...beautiful write. Recently you guys and girls have been putting my work to shame...I guess Ill have to work on some passionate poetry...Very nice work. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: A Moment of Bliss
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 06:19:52 AM AEST
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| A passionate poem.. I think bliss is some what different from pleasure. the poem is alright..venkat |
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Re: A Moment of Bliss
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 01:57:31 PM AEST
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| Ohhh love it love it! Whoo Whoo! |
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Re: A Moment of Bliss
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by Apartment213 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:41:14 AM AEST
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passion thats what this is its pure its un-tainted its raw its perfect
apt213 |
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Re: A Moment of Bliss
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 02:25:52 PM AEST
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Thank you for transporting me back all those years. I'd forgotten what it was like.
I feel I could go back now and write something in this genre but I fear Mick would not pass it |
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