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Forever Mine
Contributed by
dark_fighter_chick
on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:05:23 PM in AEST
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I look at your pretty face
I dream of your smile
Your laugh, so sweet
And a voice, full of innocence
Your hair, so long and beautiful
Flowing in the wind
Your eyes, so deep, so gentle
Your sweet scent, like the finest roses
Your soft, silky skin
I dream to feel your breath
Against my face yet once again
And your kiss, such happiness it would bring
To hear your sweet scream
To watch you squirm in pain
Under the chains I’ve locked you in
The fear in your eyes, such bliss
In this cold, dark basement I’m keeping you in
I’ll never let you out again
You are Forever Mine
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2005-08-11 13:05:23]
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Re: Forever Mine
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:09:42 PM AEST
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| Okie dokie, this one started out and struck me to be happy, but when it all went into dark decieving and obsession it just made me laugh, haha good write. |
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Re: Forever Mine
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by SirensLight on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 02:14:31 PM AEST
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| It may have never happened to anyone you know literally.. but what about figuritivly?? think of the basement as a prison of the mind, or maybe of the heart in a relationship...I know more than once I have felt trapped by situations and that those around me were simply enjoying watching my struggles... anyways... good write.. |
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Re: Forever Mine
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 02:20:24 PM AEST
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You had me up until the basement, lol
But none the less it was a good write |
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Re: Forever Mine
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by Archie on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:13:48 PM AEST
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| Okay that was weird and i hope that doesn't happen to any one. |
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Re: Forever Mine
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by Demonic_Depression_7625 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:27:57 AM AEST
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wow...i just got chills...
i like that! it's quite interesting and awesome... |
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Re: Forever Mine
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by guiltycircles on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 06:26:10 AM AEST
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| chilling and penetrating, awesome write well done |
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