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Suicide
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:12:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I Feel a disintegrated rag
Dragged by the ground of my despair
I feel the Rage that tears my soul
when I look at the mud that surrounds me
I feel that I don't want to feel
the good that might come out of me
I feel the rage of who sits down
because i'm that people's part
that says what foresees
to open the anxious hearts
for the affected flatteries of their insecurity
I feel the weight that weights in my conscience
for the decadence that i let myself fall in
for not struggling, for knowing
that de fight is for those that win before start
But I feel!
I feel and i dont want to
I would like to tear the soul that I carry in me
to turn off the light that hurts my eyes
to silence the scream that leaves my chest
to run and run until the fatigue wins me
and to find a place
where the night doesn't have moonlight
By Fernanda F. Rocha
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Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-08-11 11:12:37]
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Re: Suicide
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by Archie on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:04:10 PM AEST
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| What you wrote was really good and if you don't give up joy will come back. Please talk to someone close to you about how you feel. |
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Re: Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:20:47 PM AEST
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| Hm an interesting poem but I really did not see what it had to do with the title. It was a good write though. |
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