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Keep Britain Tidy.
Contributed by
lillyjane
on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 04:28:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I can see the rubbish, as I walk down the road,
every where I look, theres loads and loads and loads,
theres box's from Mcdonalds, even chicken bones,
and them little top up things you get for mobile phones,
more I look, more I see, what people had for their tea.
Theres laguer tins and coke tins,
at the bus stop in a row,
where gangs of bored teenagers, had no place to go,
you can see they spent the night there,
chatting to there friends, as apart from all the rubbish,
theres piles of their dog ends,
While waiting at the bus stop, a car goes wizzing by,
out of the drivers window, comes a half eaten apple pie,
what is wrong with every one,
theres bins for heavens sake,
if only they would use them, what a difference it would make.
Well i've just ate my apple, down to the apple core,
oh I cant see the bin, so fling it on the floor, Ooops!
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Re: Keep Britain Tidy.
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by bernard2 on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:26:49 AM AEST
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| Great Poem. I remember going to the UK on Holiday(I live in Austria) There were large adverts everywhere "Keep Britain Tidy." I just had to smile everywhere one went coco-cola tins. fish and chip paper and the boxes from Mc Donalds. plus no end of beer cans the litter was terrible then there were the signs telling how much they would fine you if you were caught throwing rubbish away. The trouble is no one is there to catch them the Police have enough to do without checking on the Idiots that make a mess of a most beautiful country. Bernard2 ex brit living abroad. |
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Re: Keep Britain Tidy.
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by Archie on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:32:33 AM AEST
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| This is a wonderful poem. I wrote a poem called the concrete forest that talks about the samething. It is hard to keep caring when we see other people don't. This poem shows that very well. |
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Re: Keep Britain Tidy.
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:30:36 AM AEST
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| lovely write people do have to understand that if we dont start doing something now our childrens world will be a stinking ball of trash great poem |
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Re: Keep Britain Tidy.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:12:21 PM AEST
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| A well written poem of life in general today, not pretty to see, but beautiful to read. |
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