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Pieces
Contributed by
wikedladi
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Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:07:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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-Time-
something i no longer have
-Life-
Repeats in an endless loop
-Memories-
Of better days slowly fade away
-Love-
Becomes dull and Tarnished
-Future-
Is so uncertain, yet some how familar
-Friends-
Where are they now
-You-
Pass me by without a second glance
-Me-
Im just here, stuck in an endless loop
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wikedladi
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2005-08-11 03:07:15]
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Re: Pieces
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:16:42 AM AEST
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| this is heartbreaking in a silent way... the poem speaks volumes, but the word choices speak even louder. I wish you strength |
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Re: Pieces
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by Archie on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:12:14 AM AEST
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| I like this poem and can relate to it very much. All we have are the memories of times gone by when we are alone. |
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Re: Pieces
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:42:52 AM AEST
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| as i belive we all can try to understand what people are writing but thinking kills the mood this was a great moving write and i liked the way it made me feel |
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Re: Pieces
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 02:39:53 PM AEST
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| Good write I believe this has hit home with many people regarding the way they feel or being stuck in time wbhile we lose grip with everything. |
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