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Question
Contributed by
ashleigh4
on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do i push upon the razor,
do i laugh instead of cry?
do i wipe the blood off later,
do i live or die?
Do i wear the sleeveless shirt
and cringe when people stare?
Or should i wait till the blood spirts
before i start to care....
Do i stay alive for someone,
live from day to day?
blood stops pouring out of me
my wrists begin to pray.
I kill myself again, again,
i never fail to try,
as i exult in my deserved pain,
i always fail to die...
kill me please, until i find
the piece of happiness-God! be kind
enough to spill the goblet of my blood
and wait until the droplets flood
my eyes.....
Copyright ©
ashleigh4
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2003-01-13 17:20:00]
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Re: Question
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by nightrider on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 05:56:41 PM AEST
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| wow... this is amazing, these questions are no strangers in my head... you wrote this really well... |
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Re: Question
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by Delusions on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:44:45 AM AEST
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I really like this one... keep it up!
~Delusions~ |
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Re: Question
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by sheigha on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 01:43:04 PM AEST
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I REALLY liked this! i can definately relate! thanx for sharing
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Re: Question
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by Fiona on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 12:27:15 AM AEST
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Wow...that is all I can say...
Absolutley amazing...
Lots of Luv, *Fiona*
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