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Surprise
Contributed by
anitajames
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Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:36:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm so happy it's over
I got what I always wanted
I love you, I had them
My children adore me.
This job is so precious,
I'd do it for free
Surprise,
They don't want you
You've no right to be happy.
You got rid of it--shame
You have to be punished, it's all just a game.
She feels like a pawn.
She's stone, can you make her cry?
Do it, I dare you,
She already knows why.
Copyright ©
anitajames
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2005-08-11 00:36:41]
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Re: Surprise
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:38:55 AM AEST
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| interesting write deffently made me think keep on writing |
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Re: Surprise
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:32:17 PM AEST
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| Hm an interesting write, keep writing. |
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Re: Surprise
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 06:14:27 AM AEST
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Not sure exactly what it means, but it was well written. I feel like an idiot admitting that, but hey, it's three in the morning, I don't get much at this time of morning.
Take care.
David |
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