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Gone
Contributed by
AssassinatorGirl
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Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:12:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I see nothing in anything anymore.
I feel nothing, because I've trained myself not to.
Have you ever felt like this before?
You feel there's nothing left you can do.
Unfourtunately, things do get broken,
and they can never mend.
You've sucked my motivation
and I wish my life would end.
The time is drawing nearer,
I'm withering away.
Maybe sometime you'll see her,
If you come near the cemetary gate.
I'll wait behind the rusting bars,
Greasy replicas of my heart,
Where men have gone,
When sons have died,
But returned beyond,
To their happy lives.
I cannot escape
Wounds like these can't recover
There's nothing that I had in me anyways,
There's no loss of endeavors.
From the walls comes a sound,
A most terrifying sound,
and a scream in the night,
when they run in and find.
Body tied to the ceiling fan
And the teardrops falling down.
Nothing could replace the man,
Who so happily let me drown.
But there is no sadness,
And there is no love,
And nothing can ever return.
No feelings no happiness,
And never a smile again.
Copyright ©
AssassinatorGirl
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2005-08-10 22:12:31]
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Re: Gone
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by EricBRamey on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:16:36 PM AEST
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| The imagery is wonderful...the message is very sad...good write...and a very emotional purge...Eric |
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Re: Gone
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by Sbhottie288 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:18:24 PM AEST
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| gone... nice title... i have felt being gone sometimes too... right now i wish i was gone... but keep your head up... things with be better |
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Re: Gone
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:29:01 AM AEST
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Well I hope this is just great writing.
U've conveinced me that u mean it.
Very sad but well written.
huggs,
emy
Hang in there, please. |
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Re: Gone
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by lil_noel09 on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 10:33:35 AM AEST
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| good show of emotion...good visualization :D |
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