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One Last Bye
Contributed by
sbhottie288
on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:07:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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you were the one for me
i thought god sent you from way above
i gave you the key
i thought you were my love
i feel lost and alone
and i want to grab that blade
i wish i was a stone
so id never get played
i gave you my all
i made you feel so strong
and i always bawl
please tell me what went wrong
what did i do
to make you leave
you were the few
who had my sleeve
i wanted you forever
but you hurt my real bad
i know u said never
but im more then just mad
i want to end this now
and let you win this fight
i wont say wow
and i wont say nite
i will say goodbye
forever right???
i want to die
so this is what i write..
" i love you all.. please dont be said when i go.. i will miss you all... but keep your heads up... everything will be fine.. i'll be in a better place... where im happy and free"
i put the pen down
and i begin to cry
i dont want you to frown
and please dont ask why
im in a better place
just you what and see
i wont leave a trace
and now im free
my eyes finally close
i say my last bye
i finally chose
its time to die
Copyright ©
sbhottie288
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2005-08-10 22:07:18]
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Re: One Last Bye
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by EricBRamey on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:13:34 PM AEST
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Sad...but you are not alone...it is truly amazing how wrapped-up into people we get...and how they can really hurt us when they say goodbye. Time.....
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Re: One Last Bye
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:36:06 PM AEST
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I'm feeling very much like you right now .. great vent .. you put your feelings on paper very well.
mary |
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Re: One Last Bye
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by 68birdls1 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:41:46 PM AEST
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i know just what your goin through, me and my ex were on a break, we got back together on thursday night, then she broke up with me on friday morning for another guy!
but what i have learned is that yes i truly did love her, but if she didnt love me, then why do i want to be with her?!? it will get better with time and good friends. truly sorry |
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Re: One Last Bye
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:34:11 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: One Last Bye
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by valichka on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:45:32 AM AEST
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| Very sad, reminds me of my bad dayz when I broke up. I still can't get over that time when my bf and I broke up. So here' s some advice: live on with your life, and you'll find someone that you love and that loves you :) believe in your dreams and they will come true... :) |
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Re: One Last Bye
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by Writting_Fever on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:28:16 PM AEST
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| A very sad poem but DO NOT let it get you down! The last line of the poem litteraly made me gasp! It is a very good write! |
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Re: One Last Bye
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by mskier1021 on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 10:45:50 PM AEST
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| it's amazing how well you put your thoughts on paper... or the computer... soemthing will work out dee... and i will always love you... |
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