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why him
Contributed by
68birdls1
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Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:53:28 PM in AEST
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i just dont understand what is so great,
i mean seriously other than his weight?
he doesnt do the things that i would do,
like stop you so i could tie your shoe.
i dont think he gets flowers like i would,
and you told him what you like, so he should.
does he write poems for you like i used to,
i havent until now and i know thats a booo.
but i did and thats what counts,
it just took me awhile; i was on a lil bounce.
i love you with all of my heart,
he doesnt even love you, so why let it start.
if you love him now and you dont love me,
then i will disappear, as simply as a bee.
i wish i knew what you were thinking,
but i am just left blinking.
if you dont love me just let me know,
i will stop writing these things, and end the show.
if only i knew why you loved him so,
i love you more now than ever, but you still dont want me tho.
maybe its just me being jealous of my replacement,
would i love to beable to lock him in a basement.
i just want things to be normal once like they were,
there probably isnt even a potion that i could stir.
i dont think that he is all the great,
but that is probably just from all of my hate.
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Re: why him
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by EricBRamey on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:58:46 PM AEST
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| Yeah...I don't know why I love and still write poetry for my ex...it never gets read...nor does she care. She wasn't that great...but love is a funny thing...it has no ryhme or reason...neither does good poetry for that mater...nice write :)...Eric |
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Re: why him
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by Sbhottie288 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:02:55 PM AEST
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| good poem... me and my girl just broke up... and now im filled with all this hate... and anger... but i expressed it... |
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Re: why him
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:38:55 PM AEST
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| funny how close love and hate are .. and how hate and love both color our judgment .. nice write about it and the conclusion .. |
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Re: why him
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by 68birdls1 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:44:58 PM AEST
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the conclusion is... at first i really did hate him, but i can honestly say it wasnt because of her! i tried to fight him and he got his mommy lol. he is 6'1 220, and my lil 5,8 145 butt made him get his mom lol.
but after all that i reallized that there is no point in doing this. even if i did kick his butt, i dont think it would have helped me through. so the true conclusion is i grew up and, appologized and moved on |
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Re: why him
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:45:49 AM AEST
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Sad, yet a masterpeice.
I can relate.
huggs,
emy
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