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Diamond Ring
Contributed by
EricBRamey
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Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:49:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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A diamond ring it ain't no thing,
Gotta be big, 'cause this ain't no fling.
My love's conditional, better be no flaws,
My rack ain't cheap to your grabby paws.
You ain't rich, but I'm a princess,
Gimme that rock, or you're gonna be in a mess.
Can you afford it, I don't know,
But gold is my God when you throw my head down on the pillow.
A karat at least...but bigger is better,
No diamond, no love, just a "Dear John" letter.
Eric B. Ramey
Copyright ©2005 Eric B. Ramey
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EricBRamey
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Re: Diamond Ring
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:40:44 PM AEST
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my rack is soft ...
lay down your head...
there is no cost ..
so go right ahead ..
mary |
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Re: Diamond Ring
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:26:49 AM AEST
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LOL.. cute poem Eric..Theres alot of materialistic people out there..
The best gift you can give a lover is your heart..
Diamonds are beautiful yes its true but i myself rather a bigger heart than diamond..
Nothing can buy true love...ty for the smile.. write on my friend
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Diamond Ring
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:36:32 PM AEST
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| Lol this poem was hilarious, haha, it did suit the wants of a materalistic girl which kind of drove me crazy, I hate when girls are like that, I do not waste my time with girls like that, anyway good write. SLipSiX. |
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