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Repentant Inflicted Death
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:05:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dirty
Unholy
Distorted
And cheap
God, oh God these thoughts I can’t keep
Distasteful
Sorrowful
Ravaged with shame
Every black part of my soul, sinful with cause to blame
Past all repentance, past all return
Each day plagued with wrong, to die is what I yearn
If Hell exists, send me straight to the fiery pit
Tormented for heinous sins, I do see myself fit
Walking in falseness, mangled sight and eyes so blind
Grant me an end someone, have mercy please be kind
Look upon the doomed one, misguided, a true liar
Unworthy, my transgression could not be any higher
Honest regret
Doomed mind
Soul forever tainted
Unstable ending for the beginnings I have painted
I’m dirty
Worthless
Undeserving
And cheap
God, you must know God these thoughts I can’t keep
I deserve to die
For what I have done
Never to be forgiven
For the person I have become
My death
Shall not be in vain.
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-08-10 21:05:11]
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Re: Repentant Inflicted Death
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:13:02 PM AEST
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Certainly not a worthless nothing !!
A poet at the very least, which is evident here.I'm sure there is much more besides.
Strong emotional work, well done !!
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Re: Repentant Inflicted Death
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:26:03 PM AEST
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i assume this is a poem of self expression
as an artist, so unless you have killed the
pope 2night, i don't by your proclamation of
your worthlessness, trust me ive come up
against some worthless people in my life,
my friend, you don't even make in the try outs.
(((((((((((((((((4U))))))))))))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: Repentant Inflicted Death
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:45:12 PM AEST
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| unless you've sinned against the holy spirit .. no one is unworthy of redemption .. please do not shorten the arm of Christ or make his blood of less value .. please? :-) |
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Re: Repentant Inflicted Death
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by Taurusgem1 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 11:41:29 PM AEST
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| Excellent expression, but remember it always gets better.. Great write |
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Re: Repentant Inflicted Death
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:44:27 AM AEST
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Get in front of your mirror and tell yourself every day, "I know I'm somebody cause God don't make no junk."
Sad but well written.
huggs, prayers,
emy |
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Re: Repentant Inflicted Death
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:02:20 AM AEST
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I gotta echo the sentiments of most,
(save for the fact that I wholly believe it)
that you are NOT a worthless nothing..
on the contrary;
you, my friend,
have given me alone..many and many a night.. and day
of laughter, pain and above all..
hope in people-
(that they are at times kind..gentle and caring..)
though I really do love all your darkness..lol
it's brilliant Rach..
Hugs and Love to You-
Billy |
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