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Muddy wings and tears of clay
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 07:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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i was born into the sun
melting candles in my eyes
way too dim to handle fun
but i can see your lies
i was born into this clay
molded tears to shed alone
muddy wings don't tend to stay
i've settled on my heart of stone
i was living in the gum
that she chewed like everyday
spit me out into the sun
why can't i just bubble play
i will cast another stone
into the pond my ill mind
to see reflections of alone
and dreams that i may never find
i should end this story soon
i wanna sleep for years no more
love is that one last afternoon
when i might see her nevermore
dw
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Re: Muddy wings and tears of clay
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:44:02 PM AEST
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awesome write.........
i can sense feelings of sadness and heartbreak in this one....very emotive.
and you painted a lovely picture well! |
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Re: Muddy wings and tears of clay
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by waos on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:01:45 AM AEST
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Hey that was cool, I can see why you stuck it as abstract; these poems
are fun, cause you can interpret to your hearts content. Nice work!
~Kara~~Waos~ |
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