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In His Perspective
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
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Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 06:05:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In his eyes,
I only run away,
Never fight back,
Waiting for another day,
He opens up,
I stay shut,
Telling me his joy,
As I stay in a rut,
Every time he comes close,
I try not to pull back,
This love you give me,
Is the feeling I lack,
He's willing to change,
To do anything for me,
He would even die,
Just to make me happy,
He always says,
"It's easier than I think,
Just find the one for you,"
Then all he does is wink,
The obsticles I dodge,
I'm dodging to find,
Somewhere better than this,
But all I need is time,
My mind is lost,
Yet so is my heart,
But you're here to help me,
You've been here from the start,
Soon I'll decide,
Keep doing what you've done,
I'll be found in your arms,
We'll be together as one.
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Writting_Fever
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Re: In His Perspective
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:10:57 PM AEST
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very nice poem though laced with inner turmoil could go either way hope it works out for you, i enjoyed reading it . . .
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Re: In His Perspective
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 08:57:02 PM AEST
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Nicely told story of indecision. Change can be scary sometimes, I suppose, but often it's for the better.
I hope things have worked out for you since posting this.
Keep up the writes.
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