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Why Struggle

Contributed by LongingFor on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 01:42:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Left outside in the rain
Nobody cares about your pain
Wish somebody would love you never change remain the same
But if it’s not meant to be, why force it?
If you feel like dying every day anyway.
You care, love respect yourself
And want the best for yourself
You share, help, forgive, but kindness don’t come around
Karma does.

It’s not fair what did I do wrong?
What did I say? What did I feel?
Why even have people that suffer in pain like a fish without water.
Like the sun never shines and God went to sleep
It’s always dark and lonely
Feeling cold and hungry.

It’s not fair, I try so hard
I build a bridge over my problems
Every morning waking up in the morning
Searching for myself, waking up in pain
Going to sleep in the rain.

Nobody would stand up for me
Always have myself and me
But when your faith is gone and you lost hope
You won’t survive without somebody by your side

It’s not fair, I struggle so hard to find my way
To see the sunlight
And people say live every minute of your life like there is no tomorrow
While there they go planning their future what
****** attitude they’re gonna give tomorrow.




Copyright © LongingFor ... [ 2005-08-10 13:42:52]
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Re: Why Struggle (User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:08:20 PM AEST
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a very powerful write


Re: Why Struggle (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 09:58:20 PM AEST
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This actually reminds me of a song.;

"Life is too hard for living
but I'm afraid to die
I don't know what's up there
beyond the sky
Its been a long
a long time coming but i know
a change is gonna come
oh yes it will

Then i go to my brother
and i say brother help me please
but he winds up, knocking me
back down on my knees

There were times that i thought
I would not last for long
My minds finally made up
to carry on
It's been a long,
a long time coming
and i know
a change is gonna come
oh yes it will"

Song quote "A Change is gonna Come" by Sam Cooke

This poem is a very strong write.




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