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Blazing Innocence
Contributed by
bruised_hands08
on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 11:29:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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The innocence... is truly broken.
I'm not redeemed this time, the moon sighs silently.
The sky shimmers with strength that I yearn to steal.
You look down on me, I am a just a child.
Yet you take from me the only thing I own...
My purity.
Lying there helpless, do I really want this?
You are stronger than I.
Your brown eyes are so beautiful.
I shut off my mind...
The violence... is always with you.
You've gone too far, the sun shines down on me.
The sky is ablaze with the strength that you stole from me.
You look down on me, I am just a child.
Yet you tear from me the only thing I own...
My purity.
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2005-08-10 11:29:15]
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Re: Blazing Innocence
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by Zandria on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 01:38:07 PM AEST
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Powerful.
I hope the subject from this piece finds a way to 'take' that power back. |
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Re: Blazing Innocence
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by imaginary on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:03:20 PM AEST
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I like this so much because so many girls relate to it. Even if we dont resist it still feels like we are because somewhere in the back of our minds we're fighting it, but we swallow our feelings.
It hurts so much, and I think you've captured that feeling very well.
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Re: Blazing Innocence
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by AnaBanana on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 06:57:04 PM AEST
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| i like the way u used very simple words to portray so much in this....u didnt have to say very much to get the point across...good work |
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