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ACID WATERS
Contributed by
darkkai
on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
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The rain falls and a chilly wind blows. Immortal gods cry in sorrow, symetrical
angels bring peace to the night. Eternal love can be destroyed by bad commons.
Cruel rules are given to those who are true. A strong link to passion, a weak link
to darkness. Tangerine dreams and Rosey bed buy happiness in hollowed grounds,
such a twisted way to be the undertaker in love. It makes me feel good to take bodies
and souls. Blanks stares become from the depths of darkness, graves are filled with
the waters from the skies. A mind runs wild in the hallucinating lights of the city.
Acid reigns supreme in rivers of flames.
Copyright ©
darkkai
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2003-01-13 14:40:00]
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Re: ACID WATERS
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 03:01:38 PM AEST
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| I am strongly inclined to believe that this is indeed a chemically induced poem. Interesting. |
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Re: ACID WATERS
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 04:37:43 PM AEST
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| i thot it sucked. there was no emotion, it sounded so fake. u didnt have a feeling wen u did this, i wouldnt even say u were numb. It sounds very wannabe. do u get it? |
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