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'why?'
Contributed by
english-pea-pelter
on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:20:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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A new person on my heart
I’ve always liked them,
From the very start
Even though they do not know
It’s so hard
I’ve tried to show
But everyday
My love has grown
I’ve not known them long in my life
I’ve held back from telling
With all of my might
Because what if they do not feel the same?
If they turned me down
I’d be ashamed
To show my face
Would be wrong
I’d feel so stupid
I’m not that strong
My heart’s so tender
From minds content
But their face
Is heaven sent
And every time I look them in the eye
I ask myself
‘Why?’
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2005-08-10 00:20:05]
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Re: 'why?'
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by Ineedanap on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:00:50 AM AEST
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Good emotion. Smooth wording. I enjoyed it.
Brooke |
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Re: 'why?'
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by bernard2 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 03:58:47 AM AEST
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| Take courage from your own words face up to them they could be thinking the same as you keep smiling from bernard. |
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Re: 'why?'
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by Jane_Doe on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 04:21:31 AM AEST
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| Because love is complicated. I wuld like to say that if you like this person enough, with a passion that could rival passions, then they have to like you back. But from personal experience, I don't know how true that actually is. Nice write. |
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Re: 'why?'
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by lil_noel09 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 10:46:57 AM AEST
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| you stink! lol you always write better stuff than me! j/p you already know that this poem touches close to my heart and this is a VERY good poem! |
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