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Cabin in the Woods
Contributed by
mom11159
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:02:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Someday I’ll have my cabins in the woods
Where I find peace, where everybody should
Where I told you before, my heart does belongs
Waking up early to the birds morning song
In this cabin just me and my love
We will share our blessing from God up above
We will show our love with in this serene place
We’ll never get tired at looking at each others face
In this Cabin that is in the Woodlands So Dear
Is where I am complete and loose all fear
I inhale the fresh pine smell
I see the rabbits running past the old water well
When I walk on the porch, I will see
Squirrels running freely and playing in the trees
The noises that I hear are the birds love song
Holding my lover makes me feeling so strong
When I walk in the woods, puts peace in my heart
Strolling hand and hand, knowing we'll never be apart
My loves grows stronger with each suns ray
Knowing we'll be together at the end of the day
I hear the creek, with its wonder and its flow
As we're sit there enjoying this creek running slow
We suddenly see coming towards us oh so near
What a beautiful site, it’s a mother and baby deer
This cabin in the woods will make me shine so well
With the wonders to explore, wildflowers I can smell
With the night coming in all the stars to be seen
Listening to the crickets, in natures love scene
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Re: Cabin in the Woods
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:52:39 PM AEST (User
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Oh, I loved this write. I too love the power and magic of the woods. I have this wonderful design in my head of this lovely log cabin one day my husband and I will build in the woods. Had a dream about it once also. It was lovely. Really glad I stopped in to read this. Thank you for sharing. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: Cabin in the Woods
(User Rating: 1 ) by sexypantz on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 01:06:27 AM AEST (User
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beautiful poem.
I really enjoyed reading it, and it really captured your feelings. Just reading it puts a smile on my face.
xx |
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Re: Cabin in the Woods
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:27:34 AM AEST (User
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Beautifull write. I live in the country.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Cabin in the Woods
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:32:30 AM AEST (User
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I hope your dream comes true. Living in the country is so life preserving. Everything is real. The skies at night are brighter because there is no light around. The animals get used to your sounds and come much closer. The birds sing even at night and life is as it was meant to be. Calmness and serenity will settle easily into your soul. You will resent having to drive into town for errands. Yes, I pray your dream comes true. Rita |
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Re: Cabin in the Woods
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard2 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 01:40:56 PM AEST (User
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I see that you have found mother nature. Enjoy the experiences. I have all of my life. bernard2 |
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Re: Cabin in the Woods
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:32:23 AM AEST (User
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you know l love this ,,but other people don't know that,,so I'm letting them know,,,I LOVE IT |
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Re: Cabin in the Woods
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:59:19 AM AEST (User
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If this ain't a masterpeice of poetry and style
and simply put well just add the sea next 2 it
and i'll send u deposit 2 rent it 4 a week
beautiful writting stirs my new england
blood . . . " Masterpeice " 4 sure . . .
Ben |
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Re: Cabin in the Woods
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:45:27 PM AEST (User
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Very touching, sweet, and again great imagery. You have a wonderful talent. :) |
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