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Everyday Dream
Contributed by
Lia
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Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If only in my sleepless dreams
I shall hold you tonight
Moistness of my deep warm breathe
Will show grace upon your neck
Within the sounds of my beating heart
You'll hear a precious lovesong
My fingers will dance across your back
I'll send whispers to your ear
You'll feel the flames within my passion
We'll embrace this moment in time
Captivated by your heavenly smile
My heart will start to flutter
And though our time may fall too short
We shall have until the waking hour
Copyright ©
Lia
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2003-01-13 14:00:00]
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Re: Everyday Dream
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by WordPoet on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 03:43:24 PM AEST
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| The passion in your poems always make me somewhat envious of the true recipient of your words. Keep up the good work and keep it coming. |
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Re: Everyday Dream
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by OreO on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 05:43:04 PM AEST
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Oooo Lia kinda hot in here isnt it? lol..This is sooo beautifully written i love the way you have the words laid out. It's a light poem..like as if it's floating...soft...and then filled with the passions of fire .....it's just wow ...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot....
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Re: Everyday Dream
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by nebill on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 07:05:40 PM AEST
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| I've read it, and read it, and read it again, and each time it is more beautiful than before. I only hope that the person in your dreams appreciates these wonderful thoughts, how wonderful that must be. Thanks for a really nice read. |
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Re: Everyday Dream
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by FireStorm12 on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:08:53 PM AEST
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| You know...I keep seeing all these poems on passion...and it is getting me all worked up...and I just got seperated!!!!!!!! Dangit!!!!!! Very nice work...very Hot! |
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Re: Everyday Dream
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by roisin on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 11:24:09 PM AEST
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a beautiful write...I echo the comments of the others here ......
ta
rosie |
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Re: Everyday Dream
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 03:39:14 AM AEST
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A very passionate and such a beautiful piece Lia. It's good to be reading your work once more.
Love Chrissie x |
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