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A stolen wish,
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When I was a child, I normaly was quite good,
my mother always warned me, keep out of the wood,
well one day I thought, I have got to see,
I wasn't being naughty, only being me.
I really felt quite nervous,as I put one foot inside,
the trees were really dense, a whole new world to hide,
the wind was gently rustling, the leaves up in the trees,
I could hear birds singing,and buzzing of the bees,
I came into a clearing, and stood back agog,
There was a little fairy sitting on a log,
she looked at me and smiled,i've a wish for you she said
but the moment that she said it, I woke up in bed,
So I never got my wish, it made me want to scream,
my only chance of a fairys wish, and it was a bloody dream.
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Re: A stolen wish,
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:38:52 PM AEST
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| lol. i liked this a lot. I can totally relate to this. Great Humorous write. Christopher. |
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Re: A stolen wish,
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:12:54 PM AEST
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| very poetic write made me smile thank you |
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Re: A stolen wish,
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:22:15 PM AEST
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| i think i liked the upbeat tone of this the best. you had excellent rhyming going on also. your rhythm was amazing. well done on all counts. |
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Re: A stolen wish,
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:36:25 PM AEST
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| a very enjoyable poem good job |
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Re: A stolen wish,
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by mom11159 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:38:02 PM AEST
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lol loved this so mystical and magical, your imagery so wonderful and your words so catptivating kept me in antisipation through out. loved this excellent poem
Cathy |
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Re: A stolen wish,
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by colinbaker62 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 05:45:46 AM AEST
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Lillyjane this is my type of poem through and through. I loved it.
Colin |
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Re: A stolen wish,
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by Manda2 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 03:40:13 PM AEST
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| This is a brilliant little poem. You've got to keep this up Lillyjane, you can see how appreciated your poems are! Go for it! |
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Re: A stolen wish,
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:09:31 PM AEST
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If you can make someone laugh then you truly have a gift
You did that here and after a long tiring day I thank you for that !!!
Steve |
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Re: A stolen wish,
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 06:20:29 AM AEST
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Are you sure I didn't write this? lol
I love your style, sense of humour, and ability to rhyme....priceless.
I am enjoying reading your works! |
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