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You Cried My Tears

Contributed by wachumiri on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:06:58 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



A year ago I held your heart
As one you loved had to depart

With gentle care your tears I dried
As my heart also helped you cry

Then salty tears ran down my face
My heart was broke in every place

You were the friend I needed then
You held me close and cried again

A bond of trust woven in tears
Is one we hold enduring fears

With loving care you touched my heart
As sadness tore my soul apart

I saw my sorrow in your eyes
As all inside you with me cried

Loly, always, to the end
I swear to be a truest friend




Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2005-08-09 19:06:58]
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Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:51:04 PM AEST
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hey,
this was an awesome write,and very well written too.It caught my heart,and i can relate to it incredibly,lol,i know how u feel.t/c.peace.
love,
andrea


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 08:24:10 PM AEST
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This is good. You have a very endearing spirit.


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Zandria on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:30:58 PM AEST
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This is a very bold and honest expression of emotions all wish for with a kidnred spirit. Lucky you to have found Loly, and lucky Loly to have found someone honest and comfortable enough with these emotions to express them.


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 10:28:11 PM AEST
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I don't know Loly, do I? I don't think so.

Very emotional. Short lines.

Andrew

(in your homeland again?)


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by lostwithoutyou on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 09:39:15 PM AEST
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Very very good write David. You always know how to make a person feel better.


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Arden on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:50:05 AM AEST
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Emotion weeps from this poem.
I see growth in your writing and with this write I am beyond impressed.
This is perfection.
Very well done.
Take care

-Rebekah

p.s. thank you for the thoughtful comments. They are very much appreciated :)


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 10:26:34 AM AEST
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David you always write such sweet poetry for your friends. I liked the sincerity and simplicity of this one.
-Em


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 05:10:48 PM AEST
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Wow!!!! This was such a perfectly powerful poem. I love the sweetnes and the tinge of sadness this poem has.

Great writing.

Jane~


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:36:07 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful and heart breaking. A true friend is a treasure.


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:13:56 AM AEST
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David this is absolutely so heartfelt and such a touching write. May u and Loly have an eternal friendship. Bless u both. You are lucky David to have such a wonderful friend in ur life. You are truly talented. Keep penning dearest David. I'm so glad I got on to reading ur remarkable work.
*hugs*
Sue


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 9th December 2007 @ 11:58:20 AM AEST
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despite the sadness in this, it has a twist of positiveness in it too - which i like.



Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by EcuaOrgullo310 on Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 04:21:15 PM AEST
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This is one of the best poems you've written... This is Loly... David, I absolutely adore you. You've been my best friend through the hardest times, and I'm glad that I could be there for you when you were hurting too... Our friendship has grown so much, and my dear love, it'll only grow more. I love that you're still in my life, and I'm so happy that it's stayed strong. You're my best friend. I love you, so much.
Your muse,
Loly


Re: You Cried My Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 03:07:52 AM AEST
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//// I love everything about this poem. The title...flows right on through to the end of this wonderful testimony of endearment.

I love poems of friendship, love, etc. This one is absolutely superb.

Thank you.




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