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I Will Always Love You

Contributed by sbhottie288 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 05:25:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

i love you
and you loved me
but now im blue
and i try to see

i feel like i could die
just take that gun
and begin to fly
i cant run

its time go
my time is up
but they say whoa
and what sup?

i love you kier
forever together
it was so clear
just like the weather

but now its blue
and i am too
i wanted you
you knew it was true

our love is fading
to me it seems
now im persuading
my dreams so i dont scream

i walk around
saying im fine
i feel like a clown
thats only nine

i cant hide how i feel
for you know this too
i was ready to kneel
and to say i do

i guess what im trying to say
is no matter how mean i seem
i want you to stay
i dont want to scream

im tired of crying
and feeling alone
im only lying
and now its shown

i love you kier
i will miss you madly
but please dont shed a tear
but i must go sadly

best friends for now
i hope this work
maybe even get me to say wow
even if i am a jerk

i love you kier
please dont forget
im ready to steer
back to where we were when we met

i wont pick up that knife
and i wont grab my neck
i will stay in this life
and i wont be a wreck

i want to wait
til you are ready
i wont want to date
i dont want to have another freddie

i want you and only you
but if i want that i must wait
if you only knew
that when we met it was fate

goodbye for now
i'll talk to you later
i wont raise a brow
i wont be a hater

good luck with what every you do
and your best friend is back
so please dont say we're threw
and lets make a pack

friends forever
maybe more
dont say never
lets walk through that new door

Copyright © sbhottie288 ... [ 2005-08-09 17:25:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Will Always Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:30:42 PM AEST
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this is a good poem, but also kinda sad.
it's good you don't want to kill your-self.
i like the postive glow at the end of this.
keep up the good work!
oh! ... and thanks for the comment you left on my poem too...

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