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A Spell Casted
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 05:01:00 PM in AEST
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You cast a spell on me, For I am
enchanted with your smile so bright,
Thy eyes so blue like a clear ocean,
A voice so joyful, Like a playful child
in a field of daisy's hidden in the valleys
You casted a spell on me,
On the day you walked into me life,
Mesmerized by your presence,
Time stood still, Everything froze,
Never want to loose this vision of thy
When you cast your spell on me,
You look at me with clear blue eyes,
Your voice speaking words, Silent to me
they are, Only a loving smile I see,
Upon this face so gracious as thy.
Forever hold me in your spell,
For thy I'm lost I am, In your eyes
I am drowning, Only your love,
Can save me from your spell,
And make me love you forever more.
~~ Nats ~~
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Re: A Spell Casted
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by Sbhottie288 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:22:12 PM AEST
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| cute poem |
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Re: A Spell Casted
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:33:42 PM AEST
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| lovely write keep it up |
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Re: A Spell Casted
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by rosethorn100 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:00:34 PM AEST
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wow a lovely way to put it -love as in spell casted -unfortanetly love does do strange things to us - give us feeling that no one else can give specally when it strong deep love.
let know just hope that in time the spell with affect him too
good luck
Roseyyyy xxxx |
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Re: A Spell Casted
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 08:44:08 PM AEST
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True love is a spell........one that we would gladly accept for eternity.
If nothing other, I wish you to be entranced in love for the whole of your life.
Good luck
Steve |
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Re: A Spell Casted
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by Spike on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:42:31 AM AEST
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Having just read 'Harry Potter & the half blood prince', I couldn't resist reading this one. A lovely homage to the entrancing aspects of love and attraction. Sweet, honest, uplifting.
Spike |
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Re: A Spell Casted
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:43:24 AM AEST
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I love the sentiment in this...the feelings it exudes...so very well done.
It appears your english is a bit rough in spots, but if it not your first language then I am impressed with your grasp it.
Well done!! |
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Re: A Spell Casted
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by Darkhorse71 on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 12:34:11 AM AEST
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Nats - you did it again! A beautiful write that touches the heart. And best of all it doesn't have to be a particular person, but love in general. It will fit any person you choose to love. Hang in there.
Peace and Huggss, john |
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Re: A Spell Casted
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:35:43 PM AEST
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This is wonderful, well done indeed. I'll read some more of your work in time no doubt
Colin |
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Re: A Spell Casted
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:45:50 PM AEST
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A most certainly beautiful loving write. This was a delight to read and thank you for sharing.
I have been under that spell before yet, sadly, it was broken. You write wonderfully and I look forward to reading the rest of your poems. Very unique style you have. Definitely a pleasure to read.
Thanks again,
Tim
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