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Untitled
Contributed by
happynikki
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 04:08:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Become the invisible,
trying to be seen
and jump up and down.
Make a wish,
watch it die
and cry to sleep.
Darken the eyes,
stain the wrists
and learn the impossible.
Stare at the sky,
wait for the shooting star
and never see it.
Watch the change,
as people notice
and see their criticism.
Act careless,
with what they said
and try to wake up everyday.
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2005-08-09 16:08:35]
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Re: Untitled
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by trini on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 04:16:31 PM AEST
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beautiful. you captured pain very nicely. keep up the good work.
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 12:54:20 PM AEST
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beautiful. love it!!!
amazing write,
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