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I Hate The Way.....
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:29:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I hate the way you laugh,
And how you tie your shoes,
I hate the way that you don't care,
If you break the rules,
I hate the way you drive your car,
I hate it when you cry,
I hate it when you tease me,
Or when you gaze into the sky,
I hate the way you're always right,
I hate the clothes you wear,
I hate it when you're not around,
I hate it when you stare,
I hate it when you call,
I hate it when you don't,
I hate it when you're serious,
I hate it when you joke,
I hate the way you look at me,
I hate the way you cuss,
I hate it when you hold my hand,
I hate it when I must,
I hate it when you kiss me,
Even more when I kiss you back,
I hate it when we talk for hours,
I hate the words you might lack,
I hate the way you eat,
I hate it when you sleep,
I hate it when yo sneeze,
I hate the way you weep,
I hate it when you're sad,
I hate the way you smile,
I hate it when you're crazy,
I hate it when you're wild,
I hate the way you walk,
It's funny when you fall,
But the funniest is,
The way I don't hate you,
Not one little bit,
Not even at all.
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Re: I Hate The Way.....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:47:36 PM AEST
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| Great poem, there are many, many, many people who feel the way you do. |
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Re: I Hate The Way.....
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:51:28 PM AEST
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good write. and i know many who feel like this. it's okay, but maybe your just in doubt-- just try to get to know her more-- okay? great write, though, keep up the good work!
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Re: I Hate The Way.....
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:55:01 PM AEST
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| well it was a good write but it reminded me alot of the poem read at the end of the move 10 things I hate about you, good write though |
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Re: I Hate The Way.....
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by smilez101 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:22:57 PM AEST
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| really great write |
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Re: I Hate The Way.....
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by EricBRamey on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:35:25 PM AEST
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| Hey how ya 'doin! I hate to criticize (no pun intended)...but this poem became very repetative with the use of "I hate" at the beginning of each sentence. Just an observation...no offense intended. I did like the overall meaning though...keep on writin'!!!...Eric |
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Re: I Hate The Way.....
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:47:21 PM AEST
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| you are truely talented |
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