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My Mistake

Contributed by Writting_Fever on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:17:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I made a mistake,
I know it's true,
Please try to forgive me,
Believe me, I love you,

I'm a determinded girl,
I know you can't see,
But I will show you now,
How sorry I can be,

I want to be with you,
I know I don't deserve it,
But if you give me one more chance,
I will make your time worth it,

You hate me,
I bet you hate him,
For what I've done,
For what I did,

I can't change the past,
I can't make it go away,
All I know is I hate it,
And that's all I can say,

I want to be in your arms,
With you and me only,
Caught in the moment,
But I'm lost and lonely,

I see you in the hall,
With all of your friends,
All I can do is stare,
Now my life officially ends,

They flirt with you,
I try not to look,
But you don't understand,
With you, I'm so hooked,

You think I'm over you,
You don't know the half,
If you only knew how I felt,
I want to change my past,

If we never talk,
I'll understand,
But I dont' want it like that,
All I want it your hand,

I miss your eyes,
And your funny walk,
I miss your laugh,
The way you talk,

Believe me it's true,
I think I'm in love with you.




Copyright © Writting_Fever ... [ 2005-08-09 14:17:23]
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Re: My Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:33:31 PM AEST
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Bittersweet, regret, and love...
This brings back memories.
Good write.


Re: My Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:43:28 PM AEST
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i could really feel this one great write


Re: My Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by twisted_dreams on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 01:30:16 PM AEST
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Great write... that is an awesome poem.. and it worked for mica too!!!... keep up the good work u are very talented!


Re: My Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by shaydie_lady on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 03:49:34 PM AEST
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You are so awesome Sarah
keep up the good work




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