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Little White Bridge
Contributed by
mom11159
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
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The little bridge I cross everyday of white
Surrounded by many trees of red delight
Beneath this wonderful bridge of beauty
Is a beautiful creek called Natures Duty
Once I cross and walk beyond
I come across a beautiful pond
Where you can sit to relax your soul
They call this pond Serenity Goal
If you keep on going you will find
A beautiful cottage like no other kind
Surrounded by magic, animals, nature so fine
Beauty overwhelming, they call this cottage Natures Devine
If you look beyond the cottage you will see
Numerous different kind of natures trees
Tall, short, bushy ones , and pine
They call this place Natures Tree Refine
As you continue your walk you will feel
Serenity, Tranquility with in your soul so real
You body relaxes, tension is gone, no more fear
You look around your surrounded by deer
Time has past must start back home
As you look around at the animals roam
You head on back through all the wonderful sites
Darkness comes, have to use your flashlight
You now see the bridge, overwhelmed with fire flies
Such a beautiful sight, you take deep sighs
Knowing tomorrow you’ll return to pass the ridge
As you’re walking across the little white bridge
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2005-08-09 11:05:00]
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Re: Little White Bridge
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:11:56 AM AEST
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| welcome to the site Cathy,and what a start,this write is fantasic, hugs Eddy |
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Re: Little White Bridge
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:25:50 AM AEST
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Imaginary writing, well done!.....
A bit old English cottage style, really felt like a Laura Ashley picture setting there.
Huggssss,
Nats. |
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Re: Little White Bridge
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:33:41 AM AEST
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| I've yet to see a firefly and would so love to.. this had great imagination .. (clap clap clap) |
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Re: Little White Bridge
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by bernard2 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:43:02 PM AEST
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| Mom you have painted in words that which most impressed me in my long life. Each one of us has a need for such a bridge I have crossed mine many times mostly hand in hand with my lovely wife. Than you for this delightful poem bernard2 |
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Re: Little White Bridge
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:49:28 PM AEST
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Hi Cathy, it is Rita. I am so totally delighted to see you here. It is a wonderful place with some lovely people. See you around the hallways.
Much love,
Rita |
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Re: Little White Bridge
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by Iwan on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:10:47 PM AEST
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A brilliant start. Excellent descriptions and beautiful visions.
Thanks for commenting on my poem, loved your comment, and I love this piece you've made here. I really got lost in the images and descriptions :)
great work! |
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Re: Little White Bridge
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:00:30 PM AEST
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This is a lovely poem, well done can see it in
my mind. x |
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Re: Little White Bridge
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:58:02 PM AEST
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| I see you are knew here so, welcome. I went to your page after I read your other nature poem about the cabin in the woods. Saw you have just these two writes so far. I am a tree hugging, nature loving, hippie so I look forward to more of your writes. I like to read a nature piece that takes me somewhere, your poem did that for me. So glad your posting your work here. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: Little White Bridge
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:50:21 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much for taking me on this wonderful journey of imagery; felt like you were my guide pointing out all the wonderful things. Simply awesome. |
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