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Crazy
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:42:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Step inside my mind
if ya feel the need for a wild ride
yes, come now, don't be shy
never know what you might find there
I know it's enough to cause me fear
fear to look deeper
need a shamans guiding hand
to enter this lost land
little ayahausca, maybe
turn me back to a newborn baby
relive the past
find the cure
at last...
What's to be found there....hidden?
secret notes
laughter
screams
sealed boxes
unfulfilled dreams
huge padlock to secure
haunting memories
I can't endure
so...beware
you'll want to side step those
easy now, go careful
watch your toes
Try to pick at it....my mind
sort it out, man
What's in there eating at me
causing the intense chemical flow
raging
churning
getting older seems to
intensify its growth
I can see why some go crazy
hell, I've already been
so many times
the path is worn
dragging my tail
way too often
We all have similar monkeys, man
hanging on our backs
waiting...slapping angels
not cutting no one no slack
mysteries of the mind
no man can really solve
text book case, they tell me
write your notes
prescribe your drugs
praise them for setting us free
now who's crazy?
that's right
that's me
Laura Horner 8-9-05
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Re: Crazy
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:50:10 AM AEST
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didn't someone tell ya u gotta be crazy to survive on this planet?
Very good writing as laways.
huggs, smiles-n-me crazy to,
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Re: Crazy
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:56:32 AM AEST
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lmao were all alittle on the crazy side.
well done on this write. |
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Re: Crazy
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:39:31 AM AEST
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That ending is so in-your-face, and I love it. It's works perfectly for the write. Good expression in this piece, with some really good lines.
(Besides the whole last stanza!)
"Huge padlock to secure
haunting memories
I can't endure
so...beware
you'll want to side step those"
An emotive write Laura...I hope things start to look up for you : )
Scorp. |
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Re: Crazy
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by THORN on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:22:16 AM AEST
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Very nice, very clear.
Well done.
Take Care, though.
Cheers,
-xXRayeXx |
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Re: Crazy
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:12:43 AM AEST
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| great write as always. Where did that term come from, do you know? moneky on your back? I had a duck on my back once.. when I was trying to rescue her baby..and she thought I might hurt it ..God that was scary!!! nearly pecked me to death. guess a duck on your back would sound tooo odd LOL Afffflack!!! |
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Re: Crazy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:57:42 PM AEST
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A terrific peice of writting says so much weveing poetic patterns of emotions, nicely
done sister laura . . .
peace 2u my friend
Ben |
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Re: Crazy
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:05:59 PM AEST
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| Who, Laura, is to say what is crazy and what is normal? Many people who think outside the box are termed crazy, but that is not necessarily so. Each persons brain is wired differently but if we don/t fit into the perfect little square box societty wants us too then they lay a term on us, causing fear, hurt and pain. Sad, we let them box us in. Don't woryy, just be your loving self and care for those that care for you. JMO Rita |
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