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Scared
Contributed by
Live2Die
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:30:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Scared of life,
Afraid of the knife.
Afraid to lose you,
Scared you won’t see through.
Scared to die,
Afraid to cry.
Afraid to leave
Scared to believe
Scared to hear
Afraid you won’t be near.
Afraid to need
Scared to proceed.
Scared of life,
Afraid of the knife.
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Live2Die
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2005-08-09 01:30:17]
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Re: Scared
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by Ineedanap on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:31:53 AM AEST
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Nice write. Short and to the point. I like it.
Brooke
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Re: Scared
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by Aquaelius on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:48:04 AM AEST
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"Afraid to need
Scared to proceed"
I can so agree. Good write.
Aq. |
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Re: Scared
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by THORN on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:19:18 AM AEST
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I'm sorry to hear that... Great write, but please... if you need anyone to talk to, there's thousands of us here! ;)
Take Care,
-xXRayeXx |
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Re: Scared
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by trini on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 04:28:35 PM AEST
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perfect. in everyway. keep up the good work. soon it will be clear. and you will know what to do.
-trini |
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Re: Scared
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:47:21 AM AEST
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| Nice work. The line repition works well in this piece. Good job. |
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Re: Scared
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 04:29:27 PM AEST
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Everyone fears something, it's only natural, and though myself, I hide a lot of things, probably from people I shouldn't, it's not good to do, you break yourself down slowly, crumbling as time passes, and you just become heartless. Don't be afraid to cry, don't be afraid to let it out - find better solutions then cutting. Talk to someone, just vent, it helps. Great write.
-Cassy |
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